tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post7190495569211129332..comments2023-12-29T08:35:56.504-05:00Comments on the rising mist: false dawnnorahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02228725106863747984noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-86115670020156155522009-04-18T15:10:00.000-04:002009-04-18T15:10:00.000-04:00One could build a whole imagined story around this...One could build a whole imagined story around this haiku. Nice one Nora...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-45971564129651823192009-04-18T10:43:00.000-04:002009-04-18T10:43:00.000-04:00that is a really nice one. i didn't know what a "...that is a really nice one. i didn't know what a "false dawn" was, so i looked it up, and now i do. and the haiku really bursts to life. nice.<br /><br />alan bAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-51866898358766577242009-04-18T08:51:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:51:00.000-04:00oh now I get it :)
nice, Nora
devikaoh now I get it :)<br /><br />nice, Nora<br /><br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-53691397621075319962009-04-18T08:35:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:35:00.000-04:00Made me think...34, 35 years with the same lady. Y...Made me think...34, 35 years with the same lady. Yes, we've swapped a few lies...bandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04291863523347898783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-22102100534483902812009-04-18T08:29:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:29:00.000-04:00i am not getting the sense here fully, Nora
wishe...i am not getting the sense here fully, Nora<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-83898716118211163712009-04-18T08:22:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:22:00.000-04:00_The depth and intent of each lie... need to be co..._The depth and intent of each lie... need to be considered. To -not notice- shows understanding. <br />_Lovit, truthfully. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38905172.post-79594855670366096672009-04-18T08:14:00.000-04:002009-04-18T08:14:00.000-04:00An amazing haiku!An amazing haiku!Martyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048847365398559366noreply@blogger.com