Tuesday, September 02, 2008

Deserted beach

Your wet body
Pressed to mine
The pounding surf

6 comments:

kouji said...

hot haiku. :)

Nora said...

Thanks for reading and commenting, kouji. Gotta keep things interesting. Who says haiku has to be all flora and full moons? ;-)

Marty said...

Very nice double message here leading to "the pounding surf..."

Nora said...

Thank you, Marty.

kouji said...

true, true. and interesting it is. :)

Wordcrafter said...

Nice Nora, I just love senryu (or erotic haiku) such eloquent brevity, this is lovely.