Thursday, November 06, 2008

rain

rain--
through the window
the landscape runs

2 comments:

Devika said...

the most minimal of words to convey..good one.

but the rain water generally runs over the landscape, no?

and landscape may run if its loose, but if its a rock..it gives such am impression -- but never really runs...

wishes
devika

reached here tracking a friend...good haiku blog. I love poetry, including Japanese and Persian forms...but i write the longer ones...

Nora said...

Welcome, Devika!