Thursday, November 06, 2008

rain

rain--
through the window
the landscape runs

2 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

the most minimal of words to convey..good one.

but the rain water generally runs over the landscape, no?

and landscape may run if its loose, but if its a rock..it gives such am impression -- but never really runs...

wishes
devika

reached here tracking a friend...good haiku blog. I love poetry, including Japanese and Persian forms...but i write the longer ones...

nora said...

Welcome, Devika!