Friday, March 12, 2010

last petal

the last petal
affirms what I knew:
he loves me not

4 comments:

Magyar said...

__Lovit, Nora!
__Isn't it odd that one can read with contrary views, in humor or sadness?
__An instant's ;<)Cinquain! _m

tally
corolla's all
I mark each single ray
yet at this final petal pluck
miscount

Diane Mayr said...

Masterful!

--Diane

Erin S. said...

<3'd this. Sorry I haven't commented in a while...but I am reading. :)

nora said...

Hi, Erin. Thanks for chiming in. I hope you are happy and well.