Wednesday, November 19, 2008

persimmon moon

persimmon moon--
the involuntary moan
when you enter me

5 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wow! nothing I can say...

nora said...

Thank you, Andrew, for reading and commenting. :-)

John McDonald said...

wow! is right
john

nora said...

Thanks, John. BTW, I recommended you for the "three questions" that Curtis Dunlap posts each week with different haiku poets on his Blogging Tobacco Road site. I hope you don't mind.

If you're not familiar with his site, it's here: http://tobaccoroadpoet.blogspot.com

John McDonald said...

you do me an honour nora thank you
john