frost moon--
I reach for mother's
pearl earrings
"Art does not reflect the visible; rather, it makes visible" ~Paul Klee
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5 comments:
lovely juxtaposition
john
Thank you, dear John.
Nora,
Fine one... ! I use my grandfather's grey pearl tie pin.
_m
Nice.
I wonder if 'full' and 'my' are crucial. I think the meter improves without them.
The moon seems to reveal itself as full with the pearls and, unless qualified, the moon (in traditional haiku) is the full moon.
I tend to lean toward the minimal so use or lose any of my suggestions.
frosty moon--
I reach for mother's
pearl earrings
As John said, great juxt.
Much aloha,
josh
Thanks, Magyar, for the personal reference. I'm sure you're dashing when you wear it. :-)
Thanks for your feedback and welcome, Josh!
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