Wednesday, April 22, 2009

petal-strewn path

petal-strewn path--
the promises we made
and broke on the way

5 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

I like the romanticism in this Nora, :)

My passion lies in keeping vows, even if the paths turn stony....and to that extent I am a realistic or is it hard-core romanticism....whatever!:)

wishes,
devika

nora said...

I respect your determination, Devika.It seem inevitable as humans that we fail each other in relationships, even inadvertently. Perhaps I'm not determined enough.

Devika Jyothi said...

I know, and I understand that perfectly well, Nora

wishes,
devika

Magyar said...

roiled by these colliding winds
of our crossing paths

Frank... said...

An evocative haiku. Most can indentify with your words.