false dawn--
the lie I pretend
not to catch you in
"Art does not reflect the visible; rather, it makes visible" ~Paul Klee
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7 comments:
An amazing haiku!
_The depth and intent of each lie... need to be considered. To -not notice- shows understanding.
_Lovit, truthfully. _m
i am not getting the sense here fully, Nora
wishes,
devika
Made me think...34, 35 years with the same lady. Yes, we've swapped a few lies...
oh now I get it :)
nice, Nora
devika
that is a really nice one. i didn't know what a "false dawn" was, so i looked it up, and now i do. and the haiku really bursts to life. nice.
alan b
One could build a whole imagined story around this haiku. Nice one Nora...
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