Saturday, April 18, 2009

false dawn

false dawn--
the lie I pretend
not to catch you in

7 comments:

Marty said...

An amazing haiku!

Magyar said...

_The depth and intent of each lie... need to be considered. To -not notice- shows understanding.
_Lovit, truthfully. _m

Devika said...

i am not getting the sense here fully, Nora

wishes,
devika

bandit said...

Made me think...34, 35 years with the same lady. Yes, we've swapped a few lies...

Devika said...

oh now I get it :)

nice, Nora

devika

Anonymous said...

that is a really nice one. i didn't know what a "false dawn" was, so i looked it up, and now i do. and the haiku really bursts to life. nice.

alan b

Frank Williams said...

One could build a whole imagined story around this haiku. Nice one Nora...