Wednesday, June 10, 2009

silver dawn

silver dawn
slug traces iridesce
on the garden path

4 comments:

Magyar said...

_Sunrise gifts... traces of the night.
_I like your -traces- and we seem to have that commonality this 'sunrise.'

a web
and silver trail...
sunrise

_m

nora said...

Bless you, dear Magyar. Indeed, a common wave-length. I almost went with trail, but wanted to emphasize the slime essence of the slug it left in its wake.

Devika said...

silver dawn -- a chilling image...nice haiku, Nora :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

nice one nora
john