Tuesday, December 15, 2009

rain turns to sleet

rain turns to sleet
grounding my daughter
our shared tears

4 comments:

Magyar said...

frozen rain
ice clowns play ping pong
street lights
_m

Magyar said...

Now, just a note:
__Must be the ice causing the "grounding." The play?

__All will be well, that so important support... is there!

John McDonald said...

well done
john

Devika Jyothi said...

very nice....for some reason I am reminded of Tolstoy's grand opening -- "Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way"

Not one to comment on your family....but just sharing the thought it brought about....nice poem :)

wishes,
devika