Tuesday, December 15, 2009

rain turns to sleet

rain turns to sleet
grounding my daughter
our shared tears


Magyar said...

frozen rain
ice clowns play ping pong
street lights

Magyar said...

Now, just a note:
__Must be the ice causing the "grounding." The play?

__All will be well, that so important support... is there!

John McDonald said...

well done

Devika said...

very nice....for some reason I am reminded of Tolstoy's grand opening -- "Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way"

Not one to comment on your family....but just sharing the thought it brought about....nice poem :)