Thursday, October 09, 2008

Autumn proof

with Marty

Autumn proof--
Aroma of rising bread
Leavens the whole house

6 comments:

kouji said...

that's a great last line especially. :O

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

oh no! it's 11:00 p.m. and now I'm hungry! :)

Nora said...

Thanks, kouji. I appreciate hearing from you so frequently.

Andrew, Thanks for your kind words on these haiku. I especially like your work, so I'm encourage that you find something good in mine.

Nora said...

It's funny... I just noticed that the haiku lines progress as if it were rising too.

Marty said...

Nora, I though that was your intention - rising lines...

Nora said...

No, just serendipity... :-)