Wednesday, May 27, 2009

spring trail

spring trail
the squeak of new leather
on an old nag

4 comments:

Magyar said...

_Spring is the -new-; trail is the -old-. This -new- leather on the -old- sway.
_Fine depth in this thought, Nora!

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Frank... said...

I love the way that poetry can be found in the ordinary - nice one Nora...

nora said...

Many thanks, Magyar and Frank. This is a bit of a silly senryu, but there's something sensuous about new leather, whether boots, a handbag, or a saddle. :-)

Devika Jyothi said...

I was also going with Frank...but I get the meaning from the comments, Nora:)

wishes,
devika