As we guided our horses up the narrow trail through the aspen groves and Indian Paintbrush of the national forest--dad in his cowboy hat in front and I, bare-headed, in back--a light, warm rain began. I do recall the easy quiet between us with only the sound of soft rain, squeak of saddles bearing our weight, and a horse's hoof striking an exposed root or rock. Just as vividly I can still smell the ozone, the woods, and the scent of wet horse and leather.
warm rain
only the trail before us
silence between us
only the trail before us
silence between us
7 comments:
That was awesome Nora ! Wonderful story to go with it :)
just back from fogged in island off maine coast.
this is a great poem.
works with or without horses.
alan b.
Loved this Nora.
_Often, so much can be said in silence.
_m
Beautiful - as usual. On the ridge? or up the creek?
Mom
Thank you all for your kind comments.
Cindy, thanks. If you already know this, forgive me. A haiku married to prose is a haibun.
Welcome back, Alan. I'm starting to worry: you're going to be expecting a July 4th haiku...
Magyar, insightful and wise and gentle as ever. Mil gracias.
Mom, it feels good to have your support. It was the path to the left just after the forest gate that eventually takes you down into limekiln. I can't remember if that one has a name. I think this had to do with the lost wallet incident, but I'm not perfectly sure.
nora -
ha on 4th poem!
i just want one with the word 'limekiln' in it.
speaking of moms and horseback riding - i am going to montana in august to the place we last gathered as a family with my mom. going to do a little horseback in her honor.
alan
Thanks for the chuckle, Alan. limekiln is a cool word, isn't it?
Have a fabulous time in Montana. I know several people going there this summer. Will you be in Glacier or elsewhere?
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