Friday, October 16, 2009

cold rain

cold rain
a maple leaf floats
in the water basin

4 comments:

Devika said...

fine additions here, Nora :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

love these nora
john

Magyar said...

bird bath
sailing in this breeze
a red leaf

Best wishes. _m

o_chemer said...

Nora, this haiku is comforting. "Cold rain" brings me to the end of Fall, when the weather forecast says it will snow, but it simply rains or hails instead. The image of the rain from above, the basin below to catch it and the maple leaf between is tight, all-encompassing, and like I said before, comforting. I really like what you did here.