Nora, this haiku is comforting. "Cold rain" brings me to the end of Fall, when the weather forecast says it will snow, but it simply rains or hails instead. The image of the rain from above, the basin below to catch it and the maple leaf between is tight, all-encompassing, and like I said before, comforting. I really like what you did here.
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fine additions here, Nora :)
wishes,
devika
love these nora
john
bird bath
sailing in this breeze
a red leaf
Best wishes. _m
Nora, this haiku is comforting. "Cold rain" brings me to the end of Fall, when the weather forecast says it will snow, but it simply rains or hails instead. The image of the rain from above, the basin below to catch it and the maple leaf between is tight, all-encompassing, and like I said before, comforting. I really like what you did here.
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