"Art does not reflect the visible; rather, it makes visible" ~Paul Klee
For you... April 1st.For me.... Friday the 13th.Ominous?half lifein last nights dreama river
It's a good thing I'm not superstitious!I really love your complementary verse, Magyar. Thank you.
nice poem nora.i think maybe slightly better without "the" and putting "in" on line 3.picky me.alan
Thank you, Alan. Is there a way I can communicate with you via e-mail? You can reply with an address, and I won't publish the reply. Thanks again!
nora --did you get in this issue of gean? i hope so.alan
I didn't apply this time, Alan. Did you submit? I did just have a poem in FrogPond (I say your fine haiku there too.), and I have one in the next Heron's Nest and 3 in Winter Simply Haiku.
Hi Nora I saw Magyar's version of your haiku - and then came here - which leed to to this comment:Last night’s dreamrest on the riverbankso tired
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For you... April 1st.
For me.... Friday the 13th.
Ominous?
half life
in last nights dream
a river
It's a good thing I'm not superstitious!
I really love your complementary verse, Magyar. Thank you.
nice poem nora.
i think maybe slightly better without "the" and putting "in" on line 3.
picky me.
alan
Thank you, Alan. Is there a way I can communicate with you via e-mail? You can reply with an address, and I won't publish the reply. Thanks again!
nora --
did you get in this issue of gean? i hope so.
alan
I didn't apply this time, Alan. Did you submit? I did just have a poem in FrogPond (I say your fine haiku there too.), and I have one in the next Heron's Nest and 3 in Winter Simply Haiku.
Hi Nora I saw Magyar's version of your haiku - and then came here - which leed to to this comment:
Last night’s dream
rest on the riverbank
so tired
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