Thursday, March 12, 2009

morning run

morning run--
spun light
of a spring dawn

6 comments:

Clockwork Orange said...

A more carefree song
But my prison is cold
In the dark before dawn

nora said...

a clever if dark riposte. I like the near-rhyme.

Magyar said...

Wonderful! _m

Gurpreet said...

nice !!!

John McDonald said...

delicate one
john

Devika Jyothi said...

Very picturesque one, Nora :)

wishes,
devika